On Wed, Jan 24, 2018 at 03:31:31PM -0500, John Ferlan wrote:
On 01/24/2018 10:25 AM, Kashyap Chamarthy wrote:
[...]
> docs/formatdomain.html.in | 14 ++++++++++++++
> 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+)
>
When built, formatted, rendered, and read in a browser one gets in one
long line:
[...]
So I think wrapping your change with <p> ... </p> will at
least make it
look like a separate paragraph within the <feature> element description.
Ah, good catch. Fixed in v3.
[...]
> + Individual CPU feature names can be specified as part
of the
Since the name attribute is required, rather than "can be" or "should
be" (as Eduardo suggested), I think perhaps "features names are
specified using the required <code>name</name> attribute."
I went with your above wording in v3.
or
"The required <code>name</code> attribute is used specify each desired
CPU feature."
(because we state initially "The cpu element can contain zero or more
elements...").
> + <code>name</code> attribute. For example, to explicitly
specify
s/specify/require
I used the verb 'specify' to indicate that there is an _action_ to be
taken. To my non-native ears: "to explicitly require" sounds slightly
odd when asking to take an action.
But I'll defer to your native tounge intuition.
Thoughts? I can make the adjustment before pushing if desired.
Thanks for the review. Sending a v3; feel free to adjust it as you see
fit.
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/kashyap