On 03/12/2010 02:34 PM, Matthias Bolte wrote:
> ---
> docs/drvesx.html.in | 8 ++++++++
> 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 0 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/docs/drvesx.html.in b/docs/drvesx.html.in
> index 9b413ab..6855298 100644
> --- a/docs/drvesx.html.in
> +++ b/docs/drvesx.html.in
> @@ -32,6 +32,14 @@
gsx://example.com (GSX over HTTPS)
> esx://example.com/?transport=http (ESX over HTTP)
> esx://example.com/?no_verify=1 (ESX over HTTPS, but doesn't verify the
server's SSL certificate)
> </pre>
> + <p>
> + <strong>Note</strong>: In contrast to other drivers, the ESX
driver is
> + a client-side-only driver. That means you cannot use the
> + <a href="remote.html">remote transport mechanism</a>
provided by the
> + remote driver and libvirtd. Instead the ESX driver communicates to the
> + ESX server using HTTP(S). Therefore, you cannot use URIs like
> + <code>esx+ssh://example.com</code>.
That reads awkwardly. Might I suggest something a little more concise:
In contrast to other drivers, the ESX driver is a client-side-only
driver. The ESX driver connects to the local ESX server using HTTP(S).
Therefore, the <a...>remote transport mechanism</a> provided by the
remote driver and libvirtd will not work, and you cannot use URIs like
<code>esx+ssh://example.com</code>.
Yes, that's better. I'm going to push it with a slight modification:
"It connects" instead of "The ESX driver connects" in the second
sentence, to avoid a repetition of "The ESX driver".
Thanks.
Matthias