[libvirt] Technical review of new libvirt TLS doco needed

Hi all, Does someone have the time/inclination to review these new libvirt docs, showing how to set up TLS, for technical accuracy? Creating the Certificate Authority Cert http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSCreateCACertSteps Creating the Server Certs http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSCreateServerCerts Creating the Client Certs http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSCreateClientCerts Configuring libvirt for TLS http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSDaemonConfiguration Further References http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSFurtherReferences They still need a few pics added, but thought it best to start getting this looked at now. :) There's also a high level concept page, to be used as an intro to the above, here: http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/HostCommTLSSetup It only has draft pics atm, still needing to be given words and life. Any takers, thoughts, input, etc? Regards and best wishes, Justin Clift

2010/8/27 Justin Clift <jclift@redhat.com>:
Hi all,
Does someone have the time/inclination to review these new libvirt docs, showing how to set up TLS, for technical accuracy?
Creating the Certificate Authority Cert http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSCreateCACertSteps
Creating the Server Certs http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSCreateServerCerts
Creating the Client Certs http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSCreateClientCerts
Configuring libvirt for TLS http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSDaemonConfiguration
Further References http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSFurtherReferences
They still need a few pics added, but thought it best to start getting this looked at now. :)
There's also a high level concept page, to be used as an intro to the above, here:
http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/HostCommTLSSetup
It only has draft pics atm, still needing to be given words and life.
Any takers, thoughts, input, etc?
Looks good, nice pictures, appropriate level of detail, concrete example scenario, etc. We discussed some stylistic nitpicks on IRC, but nothing major :) Matthias
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Justin Clift
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Matthias Bolte