Wording tweak suggested by David Jorm, author of the libvirt App Dev Guide. --- docs/devguide.html.in | 14 +++++++------- docs/downloads.html.in | 14 +++++++------- 2 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/devguide.html.in b/docs/devguide.html.in index 409952e..6c51c36 100644 --- a/docs/devguide.html.in +++ b/docs/devguide.html.in @@ -4,16 +4,16 @@ <h1>libvirt Application Development Guide</h1> <p> - This is both a guide to developing with libvirt, and a useful - reference document. It is a work in progress, contributed to by the - members of the libvirt team and being authored by a professional - author. + The guide is both a learning tool for developing with libvirt and an + API reference document. It is a work in progress, composed by a + professional author from contributions written by members of the + libvirt team. </p> <p> - Contributors to this are <b>VERY</b> welcome, so if you'd like to - get your name in this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess, - contributing solidly to the content here will do it. :) + Contributions to the guide are <b>VERY</b> welcome. If you'd like to get + your name on this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess, a solid + contribution to the content here will do it. :) </p> <h2>Browsable online</h2> diff --git a/docs/downloads.html.in b/docs/downloads.html.in index 66b99e1..2ce1048 100644 --- a/docs/downloads.html.in +++ b/docs/downloads.html.in @@ -49,16 +49,16 @@ <h1>libvirt Application Development Guide</h1> <p> - This is both a guide to developing with libvirt, and a useful - reference document. It is a work in progress, contributed to by the - members of the libvirt team and being authored by a professional - author. + The guide is both a learning tool for developing with libvirt and an + API reference document. It is a work in progress, composed by a + professional author from contributions written by members of the + libvirt team. </p> <p> - Contributors to this are <b>VERY</b> welcome, so if you'd like to - get your name in this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess, - contributing solidly to the content here will do it. :) + Contributions to the guide are <b>VERY</b> welcome. If you'd like to get + your name on this and demonstrate your virtualisation prowess, a solid + contribution to the content here will do it. :) </p> <h2>Downloadable PDF</h2> -- 1.7.2.2