On 09/17/2012 03:02 AM, Peter Krempa wrote:
Some combinations of filtering flags produce no result. This patch
tries
to clarify this.
Also fix unintentional double space.
Actually, the double space is intentional - for years, it was
typographical convention to separate all sentences by two spaces
(although I will admit that modern style guides now list it as optional
rather than mandatory).
---
tools/virsh.pod | 11 ++++++-----
1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/tools/virsh.pod b/tools/virsh.pod
index c6f205a..2efb277 100644
--- a/tools/virsh.pod
+++ b/tools/virsh.pod
@@ -395,10 +395,11 @@ into s3 state.
Normally only active domains are listed. To list inactive domains specify
I<--inactive> or I<--all> to list both active and inactive domains.
-To filter the list of domains present on the hypervisor you may specify one or
-more of filtering flags supported by the B<list> command. These flags are
-grouped by function. Specifying one or more flags from a group enables the
-filter group. Supported filtering flags and groups:
+To further filter the list of domains you may specify one or more of filtering
+flags supported by the B<list> command. These flags are grouped by function.
+Specifying one or more flags from a group enables the filter group. Note that
+some combinations of flags may yield no results. Supported filtering flags and
+groups:
ACK to this reword.
=over 4
@@ -435,7 +436,7 @@ domains without a snapshot I<--without-snapshot>.
When talking to older servers, this command is forced to use a series of API
calls with an inherent race, where a domain might not be listed or might appear
more than once if it changed state between calls while the list was being
-collected. Newer servers do not have this problem.
+collected. Newer servers do not have this problem.
But NACK to this hunk, as it is just whitespace churn.
--
Eric Blake eblake(a)redhat.com +1-919-301-3266
Libvirt virtualization library
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