On 2012年01月13日 07:00, Eric Blake wrote:
On 01/12/2012 03:53 AM, Osier Yang wrote:
Disk "type" and "device" are generally interesting stuffs the
s/stuffs/stuff/
user who wants to known too. To not breaking the scripts which
s/who wants to known too/may want to know, too/ s/breaking the/break any/
parses the output field, new options "--details" is introduced
s/parses/parsed/ s/new options/a new option/
to output the two introduced fields. --- tools/virsh.c | 32 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--- tools/virsh.pod | 19 ++++++++++--------- 2 files changed, 39 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
+++ b/tools/virsh.pod @@ -512,15 +512,16 @@ to a unique target name (<target dev='name'/>) or source file (<source file='name'/>) for one of the disk devices attached to I<domain> (see also B<domblklist> for listing these names).
-=item B<domblklist> I<domain> [I<--inactive>] - -Print a table showing the names of all block devices associated with -I<domain>, as well as the path to the source of each device. If -I<--inactive> is specified, query the block devices that will be used -on the next boot, rather than those currently in use by a running -domain. Other contexts that require a block device name (such as -I<domblkinfo> or I<snapshot-create> for disk snapshots) will accept -either target or unique source names printed by this command. +=item B<domblklist> I<domain> [I<--inactive>] [I<--details>] + +Print a table showing the brief information of all block devices +associated with I<domain>. If I<--inactive> is specified, query the +block devices that will be used on the next boot, rather than those +currently in use by a running domain. If I<--details> is specified, +disk type and device value will be printed additionally. Other
s/be printed additionally/also be printed/
+contexts that require a block device name (such as I<domblkinfo> +or I<snapshot-create> for disk snapshots) will accept either target +or unique source names printed by this command.
ACK with the grammar cleanups. And don't feel bad - English can be a tough language; you did quite well at getting the point across, even if I was able to provide some ideas to polish the final wording. :)
Thanks, pushed. This makes me feel better. :) Osier