On 04/20/2016 12:27 PM, Andrea Bolognani wrote:
On Fri, 2016-04-15 at 18:01 -0400, Cole Robinson wrote:
> The proper nwfilter docs go into full detail, but we should still
> have a brief bit about domain XML in the domain documentation
> ---
> docs/formatdomain.html.in | 41 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> 1 file changed, 41 insertions(+)
This is neat, thanks for working on it.
A few minor comments below.
> diff --git a/docs/formatdomain.html.in b/docs/formatdomain.html.in
> index 9bcef6a..f6ce22d 100644
> --- a/docs/formatdomain.html.in
> +++ b/docs/formatdomain.html.in
> @@ -4908,6 +4908,47 @@ qemu-kvm -net nic,model=? /dev/null
> <code><model></code> element is mandatory.
> </p>
>
> + <h5><a name="elementNwfilter">Traffic filtering with
NWFilter</a></h5>
> +
> + <p>
> + <span class="since">Since 0.8.0</span> an
<code>nwfilter</code> profile
> + can be assigned to an interface device, which allows configuring
[...] can be assigned to a domain interface, [...]
Perhaps? Not really sure, go with whatever you like better.
I used your wording, thanks
> + traffic filter rules for the virtual machine.
> +
> + See the <a href="formatnwfilter.html">nwfilter</a>
documentation for more
> + complete details.
> + </p>
This is the first link to the complete documentation. There
are two more later on. Maybe that's overdoing it a little ;)
Keep just this one and get rid of the other two. Or replace
the last one with this one, whatever you like better.
I got rid of the second one, but kept the third, since it links to an explicit
section in the nwfilter docs about parameters
> +<pre>
> + ...
> + <devices>
> + <interface ...>
> + ...
> + <filterref filter='clean-traffic'/>
> + </interface>
> + <interface ...>
> + ...
> + <filterref filter='myfilter'>
> + <parameter name='IP' value='104.207.129.11'/>
> + <parameter name='IP6_ADDR'
value='2001:19f0:300:2102::'/>
> + <parameter name='IP6_MASK' value='64'/>
> + ...
> + </filterref>
> + </interface>
> + </devices>
> + ...</pre>
> +
> + <p>
> + The <code><filterref></code>
<code>filter</code> attribute
The filter attribute of the <filterref/> element [...]
Actually I just dropped the filterref bit since it seemed redundant
Pushed now, thanks!
- Cole