[libvirt] Technical review of new libvirt TLS doco needed

Hi all, Does someone have the time/inclination to review these new libvirt docs, showing how to set up TLS, for technical accuracy? Creating the Certificate Authority Cert http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSCreateCACertSteps Creating the Server Certs http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSCreateServerCerts Creating the Client Certs http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSCreateClientCerts Configuring libvirt for TLS http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSDaemonConfiguration Further References http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/TLSFurtherReferences They still need a few pics added, but thought it best to start getting this looked at now. :) There's also a high level concept page, to be used as an intro to the above, here: http://wiki.libvirt.org/page/HostCommTLSSetup It only has draft pics atm, still needing to be given words and life. Any takers, thoughts, input, etc? Regards and best wishes, Justin Clift